Blown Glass Flowers I'm Writing A Poem...thoughts?

I'm writing a poem...thoughts? - blown glass flowers

A goldfish in a little lonely .....
Lap swimming in a dish .....
He swam in the glass rocks .....
and plastic springs ......

Every night dreaming .........
Swimming in a creek .........
I wanted to be free .........
However, he knew he would never .........

Small colorful fish swim around .........
disturbed every day .........
However, had big dreams .......
Big dreams for ......... Free
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K, which is a ... Here's another ....

A single flower ......
Was driven by the wind .........
Sitting on a hill .........
with someone other than her .........

She was alone .........
her hair is blown into the air .....
The crying was her .....
For those that I missed .....

She found a new .....
Why can I ?.....
Because I'm lonely .....
My hair is blowing .....

A unique flower ...
Wint has jumped into the ...
next to me ...
want it ...

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So what do ya'll think? Suggestions? Pointer? Something? Thanki